Thank you for the detailed feedback on my article. It always means a lot to me when folks read what I write in such a thorough and effective manner.
In my defense, I will point out that I was indeed attempting to make a joke about the word sheik/chic and MoJo's potential looseness. If you look at the writing as a whole, you will see that I pretty much attempt to mix in humor in just about every paragraph.
Sadly, I obviously crashed and burned here, and you are certainly within your rights to point it out. In my Word document, I had put the words into italics, but without the vb codes it didn't transfer. I will attempt to do a better job in the future.
I will point out at least one additional obvious mistake I did make, that being "Remember folks, guns don’t people… morons with champagne bottles kill people…" Notice the missing word.
I am sure I may have made others. As for my opinions on Evan, they are mine, and mine alone. Clearly you are welcome to disagree as you have.
Thank you again for your feedback.