I love the first picture of her. I really like her look, she has got the face of a haute couture model with her face shape as most haute couture models have a unique look to their face, especially when it comes to the sqaureness of the cheeks and/or jaws.
The first picture really shows her beauty. But the 2nd photo, not so good. She becomes lost in the pose, trying to figure out how she should look to the camera. All her energy is in her hands and her hips, as a result, her face lacks the shine it has in the first pose. So if she could learn to be body aware but still maintain awareness of her face muscles, she could go very far.
If she gets to the makeover portion, I would love for her to have extensions in her hair, because the short crop she has now only adds to the strongness of her jaw.